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You Wanted to Live by the Sea by crimson-city-inc

:iconninetteponyme:
Hello Josh,
Deviant art ask me to make a critique of your draw. i'm not sure to be able... I so love your draws, as you know.
Well, Good choice for the pink. It is rarely used in this kind of universe. This is why you draw is so original.
For watercolor, it is very good for a beginning. Try to make your draw after watercoloring or you will always have the pb of the stars on the top left. Try watercolor pens, it is fantastic ! (quite expensive but so good. I think you like the same material as me so i'm sure you will appreciate them). Try to put more black on left side behind the moutain to have more deep in your draw.
What I prefer is the character on the right top.
Very very beautiful...
Somebody has adviced me few days ago, to make different kind of line drawings to give more impact. For example big lines on the right side of a building and thin ones on the other side.
I try to train this on my side. We'll see.
Where is your name on the draw???? Don't forget to sign JOOOOOOSH !!
Take good care. And I would like more and more draws...
Ninette
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:iconcrimson-city-inc:
thanks ninette! I should have definitely done the watercolor first :) a lesson learnt!
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NinettEponyme Dec 11, 2012   Traditional Artist
You grow up young Padawan...
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